Based on Dane's comments, I un-busy-ified the logo.
I also played around with the figure and ground to add some more visual interest.
It was beyond great to get his feedback.
12.11.07
REMIX of Melissa's Moral Meter logo
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Now that I look at it in a smaller format, I don't think the skew factor works. It look much better when it was full-blown on my screen...live and learn.
Melissa
Not quite sure how it's simplified. What's great is that you're 'reading' the idea. If it was a design class that I was teaching I would get you to produce a dozen variations, I realise though that this isn't the main purpose of the class. If you produced a dozen different versions you might lose some of the focussed symbolism, that is you're reading the project too well and trying to produce a literal image, which is the same problem most everyone else has in the class. An image should add something that is not already there in the words or make you looks at the words in a different way.
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